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thanks, hopefully fixed.
what sort of feedback? is this a sort of proof of concept?
I would say as is, i think you should really lean into a voice. build up a strong POV.
also, I like the informality of the writing, but I would aim for a little bit more completeness. these feel more like Twitter/bluesky type posts than a blog.
Oats: can I suggest posting a ‘what your blog post is about’, just so that potential readers can get titillated into clicking your link? Right now ‘Oats’s - Substack’ with little description makes me turn away and say: ‘I have no idea what’s down that link and my time is precious’.
A small ask, and a different kind of feedback.