Looking for proofreader (2 pages, unpaid)

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Hey all, I’ve written an entry for the One Page RPG Jam currently held on itch.io. It’s not my first game, but the first one in English, which is a secondary language for me.

Would anyone be so kind as to do a bit of proofreading, correcting commas, perhaps improving my wooden English here and there?

This is of course a hobby project wirhout any budget.

The game is a pamphlet flyer, so two pages A4 really (front and back), about 800 words. The setting is a German city in 1500 AD - think Warhammer and Dr. Faustus; the mechanics are what I call PbtC (PbtA, but using cards instead of dice).

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I’d certainly be willing to have a look over it.

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I’d be happy to take a look too. :slight_smile:

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Ooh sounds interesting! Let me know if you need more eyes on it. I do proofreading (and editing and writing) for my father’s business… If your post is any indication, your written English is much better than my dad’s :sweat_smile::joy: so it shouldn’t take too long!

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Hey, that’s very generous! For now, I think I have enough helpers for such a short game. I’m planning for a release in the next couple of days.

However, in case I ever do something similar, I’ll keep you offer in mind!

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That’s awesome you’ve got many eyes on it. Good luck with the release!!! Can’t wait to read.

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Here’s the finished game. Enjoy, everyone, and don’t forget to leave a rating if you do!
Secrets of Salzburg by Florik

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