Michael Swanwick’s cheeky advice go new writers. I really agree with the sentence “You’ll know it’s done when every attempt to improve it makes it worse. You’ll hate it. Send it out anyway.”
seems fair. as someone who just took up writing semi-seriously during the pandemic much of it rings true. especially: write every day and read every day. seems obvious, but, sometimes the best advice just comes in the form of K.I.S.S.
it was interesting to see the shift in how I read after starting writing. everything is seen thru the writer lens now. what is this person doing? how are they doing it? what is working? what isn’t working?
Thanks for posting, great advice, even if I don’t quite agree with the “you’ll hate it” bit. When a text is done and “every attempt to improve it makes it worse”, I’ll hate it no longer. (I might become indifferent though.)
If I have lived with a project, finishing it can make me loathe it. It took me six months before I could start appreciate my first published tabletop roleplaying game. I worked on it day and night for half a year to finish it. It’s not a feeling that will always appear, but it might happen.
Michael’s a terrific writer and a great teacher. I took a workshop from him some years ago and spent another afternoon with him at a rained-out festival talking craft. One of the most valuable concepts I learned from him was the difference between magic as a rigid, procedural system versus magic as a numinous, mysterious force and the differences that those approaches help you achieve in fiction.
I’m immensely jealous; he’s one of my all-time favorites. Glad he’s still around and cooking.