Playtest/0.5/Pseudo-Beta of a big old adventure setting. Thither Ruins of the Dimlit Downlands

Your basic escape the pocket dimension type adventure. Its SOOOO long, so if anyone actually takes the time to read and give me feedback, I owe you a nice sandwich.

Nevertheless, here it is… pasting in my draft marketing blurb/back cover:

Unveiling the
Thither Ruins of the Dimlit Downlands

“All my joys to this are folly,
Naught so sweet as melancholy.”

Gentle Reader, weary of your work-a-day life and yearning for pilgrimage? Cast aside your concerns and descend into the depths of the Thither Ruins of the Dimlit Downlands, a realm where the Player Characters are tested amidst the grotesque beauty of decay.

What town of any antiquity or note hath not been once, again and again, defaced, ruinated, and left desolate?

Principally a…
A CITY CRAWL

Traverse crumbling Boroughs, each a testament to the ephemeral nature of worldly glory. Encounter the peculiar Populace— beings fashioned from the very clay of this dimlit expanse.

Also occasionally a…
A DEPTH CRAWL

Navigate the treacherous roads between Boroughs, braving the Library Rifts and crossing the Lake of Regret, while engaging in repartee with Fellow Pilgrims and deciphering cryptic graffiti.

“In morbo recolligit se animus”

  • In sickness the mind reflects upon itself.

While seeking a Way Out to return to the banalities of the Uplands, the pilgrimage through The Downlands will forever alter those that visit. Embrace the bittersweet allure of The Downlands, where poetry, song, melancholic musings, and absurd encounters abound.

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Oh this is a long one.

It also looks pretty polished and in-depth. Did you do the art yourself?

ha yea, sorry. 40k words is TOO MUCH to just airdrop into a forum, but there it is…

as for the art, its a photobash of stuff I draw digitally, public domain art, and AI image remixes of public domain art. its supposed to kinda dissemble and devolve in the same way that the dreamlike setting does. so like, I’ll grab some landscape art, paste that in, then create AI versions of it, and kinda blend/layer it in. like a visual distortion pedal? I love how LLMs kinda accidentally can create that sensation of being in a dream and looking closely at something. its everything, and nothing at the same time.

related: TENNIS is a big thing in this adventure, in anticipating to releasing it at some point soon ish, I released my tennis rules for free:

https://www.drivethrurpg.com/en/product/507964/real-tennis