I wrote a dungeon. Would you give me some feedback on it?

Hi all, this is my first time posting here so I don’t know if there’s any sort of etiquette or anything like that?

Anyway, the reason I’m posting this is that, as the title says, I wrote a dungeon. It’s only the second time I ever write something brand new for TTRPGs. It was supposed to be my one-page dungeon for the jam but it got away from me. It’s a medieval fantasy setup meant for intermediary level characters. I tried to write it to be as system-agnostic as possible. Would you give me some feedback on it?

Here it is: The Forge in the Dragon’s Mouth

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Some feedback sent by DM :wink:

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thank you so much! all great points, I’m still figuring out how to better implement them

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