In search of alpha readers

As on the tin. I’m in need of alpha readers for the first section of a project, from the Foreword through the first chapter on how to play–meaning the processes used in the procedures.

Specifically, looking for feedback on the following:

Are there spots where you didn’t understand something? Had to read it more than once to pick up the concept?

Are there places you wished had examples that didn’t?

Did the sequence of topics make sense? Did one topic lead into another smoothly?

Is there any place where you thought something was missing?

If interested, send me a message with an email addy where I can send the pdf.

Im interested. Looking for the same myself..not necessarily from you… just paying it forward.

Not sure the options on this forum but I expect you can leave me. Person message.

John

Hey! I’d like to offer feedback. I’ll send you a message.